I had the pleasure of attending Game 4 of the 2010 World Series featuring the Texas Rangers and the San Francisco Giants Sunday, October 31. Here are the tweets I would’ve sent if I’d remembered to charge my phone and assuming I could’ve gotten reception in a ballpark full of 52,000 people and their cell phones. 5:41 p.m. Sign 1 things aren’t going right: My trusty out of the way parking place was full. WTF? 5:55 p.m. Look at the pretty World Series banners. This is way cool. I need to savor the moment. 6:20 p.m. Saw guy I used to work with. What’s his name again? Oh, yeah. It’s Jamie. Seriously. 6:47 p.m. Sign 2 things aren’t going right: I dropped my hot dog. Mustard EVERY.WHERE. But I got a new hot dog at least. 7:03 p.m. There are a crapload of people here. Very, very cool. 7:15 p.m. Game 3: Kelly Clarkson sings nat’l anthem, Nolan Ryan throws out 1st pitch. Game 4: Lyle Lovett, the Bushes. Game 3 wins. 7:18 p.m. It's Mini Ron Washington. Happy Halloween! 7:19 p.m. Sign 3 Let’s Go Giants chant. WTF? Sitting in Giants’ contingent sec. Shoot me. Can I shoot them? Please? I’ll never sit in sec 325 again. 8:02 p.m. As good as the Rangers’ offense is, it can go silent in a heartbeat. First 2 rounds, not a problem. Now it’s a HUGE problem. 9:19 p.m. Why can’t/won’t they score? They are sucking the life out of me. 10:56 p.m. Oh, Cowboys Stadium all lit up. Should I take a pic? No, I’m too depressed/lazy/tired. 11:03 p.m. Bright side to the nightmare: I finally got my Michael Young T-shirt I’ve been meaning to buy for years. And that was my first World Series experience. Now didn’t that just give you the warm and fuzzies? I can’t wait to do it again next year! I was at the freaking World Series! xoxo, Jamie Add Comment Hugs: Breakthrough Bugs: Freaking out and needing a breakthrough It’s been a week since my last blog post, and that’s never my intention, but crap happens. I didn’t write anything Wednesday because I hadn’t been reading anything for pleasure. My manuscript doesn’t count, unfortunately. L And then by Friday, I’d had yet another crisis of faith in my writing. And I really didn’t want to write about that. I’d reached the 70% (or thereabouts) mark of the manuscript, and I freaked out about where the book was headed. I was mostly worried that I was cramming too much stuff in the last section of the book. Writing is fun, but, man it can be stressful. L I didn’t like freaking out, so I came up with a plan to overcome it J, and spent the weekend putting it into place. I reviewed the story from the beginning till the freak out point and then looked at what I’ve written for the end. Good news – the last part of the book is workable and viable. I still have to make it publishable because it’s still in the rough first draft stage, but it makes sense (in my head, at least). And frankly, that’s all that matters right now. Of course, that’s not to say that during the editing process, I won't discover that I’ll have to change the ending. I’m okay with that, but, for now, I’m going to go with it as is and see where it leads me. One other thing I figured out during my review is that I need to add EMOTION. I’ve been so concerned with the external plot and Dee and Jeremiah’s motivations that I haven’t concentrated enough on how they feel about each other in the present beyond the sexual attraction. I need to make sure the emotional attraction is there as well. In my first novel, I was very conscious of this, and each scene served a dual purpose of plot and emotion (in my opinion, they did, anyway). In the third draft, I will be sure to concentrate on this. P.S. This is the biggest Hugs of them all – the Texas Rangers are going to the World Series!! My exhilaration knows no bounds. And I get to go to a World Series game! | Jamie WesleyI'm an aspiring writer of contemporary romance. I heart it so. French fries, football, and fashion! Does one need anything else?April 2011 CategoriesAll |






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